New Idea for Capstone

With wanting to do a psychological drama/thriller sort of short film for my capstone project, I've been working on a treatment, which I posted previously so you can view it as I work on it. However, I've gotten a new idea this week as the staff of the Dixie Sun News has been the target of a reader who seems to aim at getting us into trouble for some reason unbeknownst to all of us.
From this incident (which is still ongoing so I can't really say much more about it at this time for several reasons), I've kind of come up with a new idea. I'm not sure if I'll be able to go anywhere with it because I'm honestly not sure where the actual incident is headed at this point, but I think it could be good to transfer into a screenplay into film.

That was so vague, and I apologize. I hope I can elaborate soon.

Story Treatment - Capstone

For my capstone I'm wanting to make a short film.
My first idea for it is a psychological thriller, however, I seem to be a terrible story writer, so I've been working on a treatment for it here https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ymaUmrzp0up20kQTJYfoM43S86bWxEkgSd9TbHUH3kA/edit?usp=drive_web
I've never written one before, but it's a start. And it's not finished. I've actually been thinking about it a lot lately and wanting to maybe chang a decent amount of it. That's the problem with all my ideas; I end up second guessing myself and giving up on them half way through. In fact, this is probably the longest I've ever stuck to one personal project.
Anyway, if you end up reading it and have any suggestions let me know! Thanks.

"A Checkmate on Murder" - student film

This was a project for my Fall 2014 Intro to Film class, for which I acted as the Director of Photography, but really I'd like to say I was co-DP with about two others who did an awesome job when I was absent at work.